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 ### Profile
 
-I am a highly experienced software developer with 20+ years of experience
-building software products for the web. I have been programming computers since
-I got my Sinclair ZX81 in 1985 and have been making them do interesting and
-delightful things since.
+I am a passionate and highly experienced software developer with 20+ years of
+experience building software products for the web. I have been programming
+computers since I got my [Sinclair ZX81](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/ZX81)
+in 1985 and have been making them do interesting and delightful things since.
 
 I mostly use Ruby on Rails, HTML, CSS, JavaScript (including frameworks like
 React) and PostgreSQL. I believe the best software is well tested and built